1. Posted: October 18, 2022In:

    Two stoner best friends and Patriots fans must race against time to get last minute tickets to a game they want to go.

    Richiev Singularity

    Up the stakes: "When he discovers his best friend, who is a rabid patriot fan is dying of cancer, a stoner must secure tickets to New England's playoff game so his friend can have one last perfect moment."

    Up the stakes:

    “When he discovers his best friend, who is a rabid patriot fan is dying of cancer, a stoner must secure tickets to New England’s playoff game so his friend can have one last perfect moment.”

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  2. Posted: September 29, 2022In:

    A dysfunctional young man with a history of being unable to assimilate into normal society needs help in winning a local golf tournament and believes it comes from a talking golf ball.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi Donn Curbow, This is how I see it: "To win a local golf tournament, a dysfunctional young man asks a talking golf ball to help him win a local golf tournament." I hope this helps Good Luck

    Hi Donn Curbow,

    This is how I see it:

    “To win a local golf tournament, a dysfunctional young man asks a talking golf ball to help him win a local golf tournament.”

    I hope this helps
    Good Luck

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  3. Posted: September 9, 2022In:

    A man goes to a class reunion his high school classmate he pined for only to find out she became famous.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi tony18, This sounds like a synopsis more than a logline to me. You are telling your story in a short paragraph. I suggest 1- Correcting grammar/spelling 2- Use the logline "generator" and/or 3- Click on the "Formula" icon at the top of this page and study the content carefully. Good Luck

    Hi tony18,

    This sounds like a synopsis more than a logline to me. You are telling your story in a short paragraph. I suggest
    1- Correcting grammar/spelling
    2- Use the logline “generator”
    and/or
    3- Click on the “Formula” icon at the top of this page and study the content carefully.

    Good Luck

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