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  1. Posted: November 1, 2021In: Coming of Age

    A coming-of-age lover dies at the hands of his new lover’s adversary but finds a way to come back for one hour each day if she will have him; otherwise, he’ll remain trapped in a dark world for the duration of her life.

    Jabousan Penpusher
    Added an answer on November 2, 2021 at 4:49 am

    Make me feel like a dark "groundhog day"

    Make me feel like a dark “groundhog day”

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  2. Posted: October 11, 2021In: Coming of Age

    An African teenager gets a chance at a new life in rural America and adopts a smart-talking street cat who is wanted by the law.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on October 13, 2021 at 12:54 pm

    This is what I can glean: “An African teenager and a cheeky street cat [GOAL] in rural America” Make this yours, keep going!

    This is what I can glean:
    “An African teenager and a cheeky street cat [GOAL] in rural America”

    Make this yours, keep going!

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  3. Posted: October 5, 2021In: Coming of Age

    When a star studded, self-centered young talented musician lusting for the lifestyle of a rockstar, scores him and his band of brothers a chance to be signed and mentored by one of the music industry’s big time acts, he must wrestle with the rewards and pitfalls of stardom, love, and loyalty in the music industry in order to maintain his integrity as an artist and become a better man to those around him.

    Philippe Le Miere Logliner
    Added an answer on October 5, 2021 at 4:25 pm

    "self-centered young talented musician" = protagonist "scores a chance into music industry’s big time acts" = inciting incident Great logline! Clear statement of protagonist's character flaw - self-centered. Then BANG! their dreams come true with an inciting incident. How will a selfish person behavRead more

    “self-centered young talented musician” = protagonist

    “scores a chance into music industry’s big time acts” = inciting incident

    Great logline! Clear statement of protagonist’s character flaw – self-centered. Then BANG! their dreams come true with an inciting incident. How will a selfish person behave, when suddenly they get what they want? Lots of potential for conflict there.

    Question: Who then is the antagonist? There’s a suggestion of wrestling with rewards and pitfalls, but the statement feels abstract. Difficult to imagine in any concrete sense. But if a bad guy was thrown in?

    And this villain character, what if they were, well you know, really nice? Likeable in fact, call them selfless, generous, and caring. Quite a contrast here, and one that may even imply the character arc, more than simply stating “a better man to those around him”.

    Through profoundly different stories, it kind’a reminds me of Gone with the Wind (1939). Scarlett O’Hara an’t that nice a girl, every one around her is so much nicer. Yet we connect with this character because of her flaws, and how she struggles to amend them. Just wondering who is your Rhett Butler.in your story?

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