1. Posted: May 25, 2023In:

    When the Hungarian ballroom world champion comes to the US to teach dance to wealthy students, he quickly discovers the corruption and betrayal that stand between him and the fast-fading American Dream.

    Odie Samurai

    Very cool, but what does the protag do with the “discovery?” Example: Immigrating to the US to teach dance to wealthy students, a famous Hungarian ballroom instructor must overcome the corruption and betrayal between him and the fast-fading American Dream. Keep going!

    Very cool, but what does the protag do with the “discovery?”

    Example:
    Immigrating to the US to teach dance to wealthy students, a famous Hungarian ballroom instructor must overcome the corruption and betrayal between him and the fast-fading American Dream.

    Keep going!

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  2. Posted: April 10, 2023In:

    To The Greater Glory of God – Beginning before the Nativity, extending through the Crucifixion and Resurrection, and using authentic biblical sites in Israel and the surrounding areas, this inspirational drama brings to life the story of Jesus Christ, as recorded in the Scriptures.

    NisVinten Logliner

    This could be a great story. But it’s not a logline. You must write it so we understand at least: main character, goal and main objective for this specific story. ;)

    This could be a great story. But it’s not a logline.
    You must write it so we understand at least: main character, goal and main objective for this specific story.
    😉

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  3. Posted: April 24, 2023In:

    A well-known celebrity falls for a girl, unknowingly below his social status. He’s torn between honoring his familial traditions and societal expectations regarding relationships or following his heart and true desires regardless of the consequences.

    Richiev Singularity

    Is social status still a thing?

    Is social status still a thing?

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