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  1. Posted: July 28, 2023In: SciFi

    After they were executed for their crimes, and instead of waking up in the afterlife, the eight found themselves on a ship that had anchored in the middle of the sea. The ship slipped into a whirlpool that took them to the shore of an island, where they saw horrors.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on July 28, 2023 at 9:29 am

    At this point, you have a premise but not yet a story. (At least by the logline) To turn the premise into a story, you need a lead character, with a goal, and something standing in the way of that goal. The premise sounds interesting. Now it just needs an equally compelling lead character.

    At this point, you have a premise but not yet a story. (At least by the logline)
    To turn the premise into a story, you need a lead character, with a goal, and something standing in the way of that goal.
    The premise sounds interesting.
    Now it just needs an equally compelling lead character.

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  2. Posted: April 10, 2023In: SciFi

    In Quito, Ecuador, an indigenous singer and dancer with powers to slow down or advance time uses them as a resource to make decisions that always make her happy; as she grows older, what she doesn’t imagine is that she will believe she is losing them, thus changing the whole course of her life.

    xtra3440 Penpusher
    Added an answer on May 8, 2023 at 4:15 pm

    This is really good! I’d love to read/watch it. I can only think of it benefiting from conciseness. Things like replacing singer and dancer with performer, and replacing the power description with something like “time manipulation powers” and of course rearranging the other words/sentences to fit.

    This is really good! I’d love to read/watch it. I can only think of it benefiting from conciseness. Things like replacing singer and dancer with performer, and replacing the power description with something like “time manipulation powers” and of course rearranging the other words/sentences to fit.

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  3. Posted: January 8, 2023In: SciFi

    A struggling actor from Brooklyn named Safari Zamani and a polymath warrior princess from 10th century Baghdad named Maryam Astrolabe team up to save the library catalog of The House of Wisdom – and of western civilization itself, from being burnt by foreign invaders.

    mariabv Penpusher
    Added an answer on January 11, 2023 at 10:01 am

    Including the full names is making it a little clunky and difficult to read.

    Including the full names is making it a little clunky and difficult to read.

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