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  1. Posted: June 21, 2022In: SciFi

    A neuropsychologist must use an experimental technology that allows her to enter the minds of her patients in order to save a severely abused woman in a coma, but when inexplicable and frightening things begin happening in her real life, she realizes she must save herself or risk losing her own sanity.

    BenGilani Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 28, 2022 at 5:39 pm

    A female neuropsychologist who uses experimental technology to save a patient in a coma realizes she must save her own sanity as she begins to experience inexplicable and terrifying moments in her own life.

    A female neuropsychologist who uses experimental technology to save a patient in a coma realizes she must save her own sanity as she begins to experience inexplicable and terrifying moments in her own life.

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  2. Posted: June 24, 2022In: SciFi

    When the disappearance of his wife falls in the hands of androids, a flawed father must seek answers to the reasoning behind his loss while mistakenly neglecting his daughter in the process

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 24, 2022 at 7:33 pm

    You might want to reconsider the first line. (up to the coma) I am not quite sure what you mean by, "When the disappearance of his wife falls in the hands of androids..." The way the line is written makes its meaning unclear. Here is just a guess: ----- "When his wife is killed by androids, a flawedRead more

    You might want to reconsider the first line. (up to the coma)

    I am not quite sure what you mean by, “When the disappearance of his wife falls in the hands of androids…”

    The way the line is written makes its meaning unclear. Here is just a guess:
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    “When his wife is killed by androids, a flawed father seeks answers to the loss, while mistakenly neglecting his daughter.”
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    Anyway, a little re-write with some clarity will help the logline get across what is clearly an interesting story concept.

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  3. Posted: June 19, 2022In: SciFi

    The survivor of a failed space mission must prove his loyalties between the bizarre inhabitants of an asteroid colony and the mad doctor who controls the colony or face certain death in the void of space.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 19, 2022 at 6:30 pm

    What is the central conflict? Is the central conflict just that the lead must prove his loyalty or die? Just curious.

    What is the central conflict?

    Is the central conflict just that the lead must prove his loyalty or die?
    Just curious.

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