1. Posted: November 4, 2022In:

    Brendan has mental issues because he was molested by his parents as a child, so when he becomes older, he goes on a bloody rampage declaring he’s God.

    Richiev Singularity

    Going on a rampage is not a goal, it is an action. At his core, what does your lead character truly want?

    Going on a rampage is not a goal, it is an action. At his core, what does your lead character truly want?

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  2. Posted: November 4, 2022In:

    The weight of the world is strenuous on Mother Earth’s shoulders doing her best remaining solid, but the world is pushing her to a breaking point.

    Richiev Singularity

    Who is the lead character? What do they want? What is standing in their way?

    Who is the lead character?
    What do they want?
    What is standing in their way?

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  3. Posted: October 11, 2022In:

    When a socially-awkward man encounters a thespian girl in an improv class, he must push past his anxiety and perform in a battle for her hand against a man with the same intent.

    Mike Pedley Singularity

    The whole thing kinda reduces the girl to a prize to be won... not sure that's really appropriate in this modern day world. She needs to be an active character, not just a trophy.

    The whole thing kinda reduces the girl to a prize to be won… not sure that’s really appropriate in this modern day world. She needs to be an active character, not just a trophy.

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