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  1. Posted: March 13, 2023In: Short Film

    When a devoted mother gets abducted by three dark entities into an alternate reality, a young girl, along with a sentient doll and a sly cat, must venture into the world to save her or she will never see her again.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on March 22, 2023 at 7:51 am

    Leaning towards: “When three dark entities from an alternate reality abduct a devoted mother, a young girl with a sentient doll and sly cat comes to the rescue.” What’s the intent of the three baddies for the mother? Use the answer to complete the rescue plan rewrite. I hope you find this constructiRead more

    Leaning towards:
    “When three dark entities from an alternate reality abduct a devoted mother, a young girl with a sentient doll and sly cat comes to the rescue.”

    What’s the intent of the three baddies for the mother? Use the answer to complete the rescue plan rewrite.

    I hope you find this constructive. Take care.

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  2. Posted: March 12, 2023In: Short Film

    When his older brother is blinded by a blow to the head, a hearing-impaired boy scout must guide his injured brother through a dense forest and back to safety.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 14, 2023 at 7:15 pm

    I like the premise and I think your logline is pretty solid. ----- "When his older brother is blinded by a blow to the head while camping in the Blue Mountains, a hearing-impaired boy scout must guide his brother through dense forest, and dangerous animals, all with bad weather on the way." ----- YoRead more

    I like the premise and I think your logline is pretty solid.
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    “When his older brother is blinded by a blow to the head while camping in the Blue Mountains, a hearing-impaired boy scout must guide his brother through dense forest, and dangerous animals, all with bad weather on the way.”
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    You should check out a 70s movie called “Walkabout.” It has a similar premise, however, your story ups the stakes with the head injury and the lead character also being hearing impaired.

    Great Idea, good luck with this!

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  3. Posted: February 24, 2023In: Short Film

    In a world where vampires and humans live side by side a mature teen boy recently turned by his ex partner must decide if abandoning his morals and going against everything he believes is worth his own survival.

    Philippe Le Miere Logliner
    Added an answer on March 1, 2023 at 5:54 am

    When an independent, but uncertain teen boy is turned vampire by an ex-lover, he must find the anti-vampire serum or risk insanity.

    When an independent, but uncertain teen boy is turned vampire by an ex-lover,
    he must find the anti-vampire serum or risk insanity.

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