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  1. Posted: June 27, 2022In: Short Film

    Year 2000 hopefuls are bystanders as life throws cruel blow that will determine their once thought perfect futures.

    Lucas McDowall Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 27, 2022 at 2:57 pm

    I love the premise but maybe try flipping the placements of some of the points, possibly: 'When life throws him a curveball, the 2000's hopeful must determine how to counter the cruel blow to save his perfect future' In saying that, I am unclear of what his perfect future is, nor do I know what theRead more

    I love the premise but maybe try flipping the placements of some of the points, possibly:

    ‘When life throws him a curveball, the 2000’s hopeful must determine how to counter the cruel blow to save his perfect future’

    In saying that, I am unclear of what his perfect future is, nor do I know what the cruel blow is.

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  2. Posted: June 26, 2022In: Short Film

    When home is infested with cockroaches, a paranoid recluse must overcome his need for control in order to destroy his home to kill the infestation.

    LachieM Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 27, 2022 at 10:29 am

    I feel like his goal to kill the cockroaches and what he must overcome don't really go hand in hand. If he were to overcome his need for control, won't the protagonist be alright with seeing the occasional cockroach? I can definitely see a great short story idea here! but maybe tighten down what theRead more

    I feel like his goal to kill the cockroaches and what he must overcome don’t really go hand in hand. If he were to overcome his need for control, won’t the protagonist be alright with seeing the occasional cockroach?

    I can definitely see a great short story idea here! but maybe tighten down what the true goal or need for your character is.

    Good luck!

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  3. Posted: June 27, 2022In: Short Film

    Dangerous and heart-wrenching things an elderly Charlie does because of his own Alzheimer’s and bad childhood memories.

    Damon CONG Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 27, 2022 at 3:27 am

    What mood should Charlie be in as a child? cry? Flat face but sad inside? Coincidence?

    What mood should Charlie be in as a child? cry? Flat face but sad inside? Coincidence?

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