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  1. Posted: September 19, 2023In: Thriller

    one of the twin police duo is not in his right mind but he is very smart also no one knows what macabre plans this one has in mind implicates him in wanting to commit a murder in fact there are investigations but he camouflages himself in his own work which leads him to not be discovered in the future from there they will be involved in other matters including the stalking of his brother’s daughter, his twin..

    Karel Segers Samurai
    Added an answer on September 22, 2023 at 8:42 am

    This reads like a stream-of-consciousness run-on sentence. I have read it twice and still don't have a clue what it is about. May I suggest you read the training materials on this site? This is not a story concept as it merely lists two events. Read the sections labeled "Formula" and "Examples", theRead more

    This reads like a stream-of-consciousness run-on sentence. I have read it twice and still don’t have a clue what it is about.

    May I suggest you read the training materials on this site? This is not a story concept as it merely lists two events.

    Read the sections labeled “Formula” and “Examples”, then read some example loglines here on the site and learn from the reviews.

    Good luck!

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  2. Posted: August 24, 2023In: Thriller

    A Las Vegas cop, working undercover as a stripper, uses witchcraft to enlist a clueless, reluctant werewolf/degenerate gambler to hunt down a ruthless vampire couple hooked on cocaine-laced blood.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on August 26, 2023 at 2:38 am

    Insane fun – where do I throw my $ 😉 "An undercover Vegas cop working as a stripper bewitches a reluctant werewolf gambler to hunt down a ravenous vampire couple hooked on cocaine-laced blood." Keep going!

    Insane fun – where do I throw my $ 😉

    “An undercover Vegas cop working as a stripper bewitches a reluctant werewolf gambler to hunt down a ravenous vampire couple hooked on cocaine-laced blood.”

    Keep going!

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  3. Posted: June 29, 2023In: Thriller

    An Indigenous detective faces off with the unwritten law of nature an eye for an eye. He must immerse in a world of life and death before the hunters become the hunted.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on June 29, 2023 at 10:20 pm

    After reading your logline, I am unsure what the story is about. You should try writing a second logline using completely different words to tell the story differently. That does not mean your story isn't good, it just means the logline is a tiny bit vague.

    After reading your logline, I am unsure what the story is about.
    You should try writing a second logline using completely different words to tell the story differently.

    That does not mean your story isn’t good, it just means the logline is a tiny bit vague.

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