Remember that a LOGLINE is referred to as a One-Line (and is usually 1 or at most 2 lines). You're giving a synopsis. A logline might be something like this: A paranormal investigator, a writer, and a radio personality find themselves at an abandon B&B with no memory of how they got there. You dRead more
Remember that a LOGLINE is referred to as a One-Line (and is usually 1 or at most 2 lines). You’re giving a synopsis.
A logline might be something like this: A paranormal investigator, a writer, and a radio personality find themselves at an abandon B&B with no memory of how they got there.
You don’t need to give away Moses was a cop or Alex is unemployed, but I would use DJ or Talk show host (or whatever Laura does on radio). Also the shooting is in the story not the logline.
We know who they are, and what the story is from that one sentence. Why they’re there is why I’ll pay $15 to see.
This is a scene not a story. A Story: Lead character Something happens to them This creates a goal Something stands in the way of that goal Who is the lead character? What do they want? What is standing in their way?
This is a scene not a story.
A Story: Lead character Something happens to them This creates a goal Something stands in the way of that goal
Who is the lead character? What do they want? What is standing in their way?
The lives of Moses Hudson, a retired alcoholic cop, turned paranormal investigator; Alex Norvin, an unemployed writer; and Laura Norvin, a radio personality, are thrust into chaos after awakening at a Haunted Arkansas Bed and Breakfast with zero memory of how they arrived seconds after an active shooter event at a truck stop.
Vince Caruso
Remember that a LOGLINE is referred to as a One-Line (and is usually 1 or at most 2 lines). You're giving a synopsis. A logline might be something like this: A paranormal investigator, a writer, and a radio personality find themselves at an abandon B&B with no memory of how they got there. You dRead more
Remember that a LOGLINE is referred to as a One-Line (and is usually 1 or at most 2 lines). You’re giving a synopsis.
A logline might be something like this:
A paranormal investigator, a writer, and a radio personality find themselves at an abandon B&B with no memory of how they got there.
You don’t need to give away Moses was a cop or Alex is unemployed, but I would use DJ or Talk show host (or whatever Laura does on radio). Also the shooting is in the story not the logline.
We know who they are, and what the story is from that one sentence. Why they’re there is why I’ll pay $15 to see.
See lessAt a truck stop in Arkansas, a retired alcoholic cop turned paranormal investigator on a quest to reunite with his deceased son warns a brother and sister not to check into the Hardin Hill Bed and Breakfast.
Richiev
This is a scene not a story. A Story: Lead character Something happens to them This creates a goal Something stands in the way of that goal Who is the lead character? What do they want? What is standing in their way?
This is a scene not a story.
A Story:
Lead character
Something happens to them
This creates a goal
Something stands in the way of that goal
Who is the lead character?
See lessWhat do they want?
What is standing in their way?
When a young man meets his girlfriends family for the first time he slowly realises he is in dager and he must get out.
beezeebee
Hi nines, Sounds like a logline crafted after watching the movie "Get Out," which is even the same genre...
Hi nines,
Sounds like a logline crafted after watching the movie “Get Out,” which is even the same genre…
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