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  1. Posted: September 6, 2022In: Student Loglines

    When an undercover police officier goes missing, a scared firefighter about to lose his job has to step up to infiltrate the gang the police dissapeared in.

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    Added an answer on September 19, 2022 at 2:36 am

    Hi EmelieN, Can you write a short synopsis? It will help us help you. Cheers

    Hi EmelieN,
    Can you write a short synopsis? It will help us help you.
    Cheers

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  2. Posted: September 6, 2022In: Student Loglines

    When a sanctimonious woman wakes up to a truck of movers who have been ordered to empty her home, she must barricade the house as long as she can in order to find out why this is happening and prevent herself from becoming homeless.

    BenGilani Logliner
    Added an answer on September 19, 2022 at 1:13 am

    Hi Sonja, Here's what I understand from reading your logline. How does this sound to you? "To stop movers from wrongfully evicting her and to prevent ending up homeless, a churchy woman must barricade her house and stand her ground until she can find out what is going on." I hope this helps Good LucRead more

    Hi Sonja,

    Here’s what I understand from reading your logline. How does this sound to you?

    “To stop movers from wrongfully evicting her and to prevent ending up homeless, a churchy woman must barricade her house and stand her ground until she can find out what is going on.”

    I hope this helps
    Good Luck

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  3. Posted: September 6, 2022In: Student Loglines

    When an invaluable item is stolen from the Royal Palace by pirates residing in the lawless archipelagoes, in 17th century Stockholm, a newbie officer must choose between his duties to the crown and his childhood love who was exiled to the islands many years ago.

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    Added an answer on September 18, 2022 at 9:58 pm

    Hi PetronellaLäckgren, Let us break down your logline into segments and see it from the readers' POV. 1- It's the 17th century, Stockholm. 2- An invaluable item is stolen from the Royal Palace by pirates residing in the lawless archipelagoes. 3- A newbie officer must choose between his duties to theRead more

    Hi PetronellaLäckgren,

    Let us break down your logline into segments and see it from the readers’ POV.

    1- It’s the 17th century, Stockholm.
    2- An invaluable item is stolen from the Royal Palace by pirates residing in the lawless archipelagoes.
    3- A newbie officer must choose between his duties to the crown and his childhood love
    4- The newbie officer’s childhood love was exiled to the islands many years ago

    Now let us see if we can find the relation between segments of the story (if there are any).

    Do you see where I’m going with this?

    I think you should connect the segments by mentioning their relation. I think you should remove unnecessary info and re-write it.

    I hope this helps
    Good Luck

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