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I love the idea! What is his goal here, with giving away the assets? What's at stake, what can his coworkers and shareholders do if he succeeds?
You seem to have three things that set this story in motion, 1: He receives a mysterious phone call from a stranger, 2: his home is invaded, 3: His family is kidnapped. You should pick one, then tell us what he must do about it.
I suggest the logline should more clearly establish a causal connection between her parent's murder and her career as a cop; that is, the murder was her prime motivation for becoming a cop. And then...