He refuses to take credit for all the bad things happening no matter how much his neighbours praise him.
CraigDGriffithsUberwriter
A christian struggles with his fate when his new neighbours are satanists, this is how he discovers he is actually the devil himself. “668 the neighbour of the beast”
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Odie
Good stuff brother, dig the title.
I added some focus to your protag and wonder.
“A reverend begins to question his fate when his new Satanist neighbors are hell-bent on proving he’s their messiah”
Richiev
Your logline seems to indicate that the lead character is the neighbor of the beast.
However, it also seems to read that the lead character is the devil himself.
Is the lead character the beast or is his neighbor the beast?
Or in this story, is the Devil and the Beast two separate characters?
This seems a little confusing as written.
CraigDGriffiths
He is the devil. The devil is the beast. The term is a play on word “666 the number of the beast”.
He is the devil and struggles with that. It is an episodic style comedy.