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JessieSamurai
Asked: April 7, 20212021-04-07T23:40:05+10:00 2021-04-07T23:40:05+10:00In: Comedy

A closed-off artist tries to leave her old life behind without attachments, when an anonymous one-night stand goes hilariously wrong and the protective wall around the painful memory, isolating her, begins to crack.

(existing script, romantic comedy)

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    1. Rutger Oosterhoff

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      2021-04-09T01:03:35+10:00Added an answer on April 9, 2021 at 1:03 am

      Ok, I get it this is what we call a Tragicomedy.

      When the one-night stand of a formerly abused artist goes hilariously wrong, she decides to front-on face her fears by doing stand-up comedy.

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        2021-04-09T16:46:29+10:00Replied to answer on April 9, 2021 at 4:46 pm

        That would be an interesting movie! 😁👏
        I’ll need to adjust to an existing script. Nice and crisp though, thank you! Can use that as a template.

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      2021-04-08T01:03:50+10:00Added an answer on April 8, 2021 at 1:03 am

      Your artist has issues, but I am unable to glean why she’s hurt – thus I cannot fully grasp her psychology. Why was this one-night stand hilarious? It reads like this one-nighter positively impacts her life, but I am unable to connect how this stranger helps her “tear down the wall”.

      BTW: An artist’s medium speaks volumes e.g. While bodypainting a nude model thing’s get hot – you get the idea.

      Hope you find this constructive, take care.

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        2021-04-09T16:49:04+10:00Replied to answer on April 9, 2021 at 4:49 pm

        I think I know how to approach it.
        I’ll need to leave the script alone for the most part, but more cards on the table with the logline.
        Got it, thank you! 😁🙏

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