JessieSamurai Asked: April 7, 20212021-04-07T23:40:05+10:00 2021-04-07T23:40:05+10:00In: ComedyA closed-off artist tries to leave her old life behind without attachments, when an anonymous one-night stand goes hilariously wrong and the protective wall around the painful memory, isolating her, begins to crack.(existing script, romantic comedy) ShareFacebook4 ReviewsVotedOldestRecentOdie 4 Loglines 254 Reviews 26 Best Reviews 1,558 Points View Profile Odie Samurai 2021-04-08T01:03:50+10:00Added an answer on April 8, 2021 at 1:03 am Your artist has issues, but I am unable to glean why she’s hurt – thus I cannot fully grasp her psychology. Why was this one-night stand hilarious? It reads like this one-nighter positively impacts her life, but I am unable to connect how this stranger helps her “tear down the wall”.BTW: An artist’s medium speaks volumes e.g. While bodypainting a nude model thing’s get hot – you get the idea.Hope you find this constructive, take care.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppJessie 11 Loglines 76 Reviews 8 Best Reviews 1,950 Points View Profile Jessie Samurai 2021-04-09T16:49:04+10:00Replied to answer on April 9, 2021 at 4:49 pm I think I know how to approach it. I’ll need to leave the script alone for the most part, but more cards on the table with the logline. Got it, thank you! 😁🙏0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppRutger Oosterhoff 30 Loglines 261 Reviews 8 Best Reviews 918 Points View Profile Rutger Oosterhoff Logliner 2021-04-09T01:03:35+10:00Added an answer on April 9, 2021 at 1:03 am Ok, I get it this is what we call a Tragicomedy.When the one-night stand of a formerly abused artist goes hilariously wrong, she decides to front-on face her fears by doing stand-up comedy.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppJessie 11 Loglines 76 Reviews 8 Best Reviews 1,950 Points View Profile Jessie Samurai 2021-04-09T16:46:29+10:00Replied to answer on April 9, 2021 at 4:46 pm That would be an interesting movie! 😁👏 I’ll need to adjust to an existing script. Nice and crisp though, thank you! Can use that as a template.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppYou must login to add an answer. Username or email* Password* Remember Me! Forgot Password?