A computer hacking team has found themselves in a race against time to erase their digital fingerprints after attracting the attention of the secret service.

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    Default Posted on December 27, 2012 in Public.
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      Include what they did that got the secret service’s attention, and you might have something here.

      Ever see ‘Sneakers’? Great movie.

      Default Answered on December 27, 2012.
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        That’s fine, but surely that’s business as usual for a team of hackers? What are the stakes here? Why tell the story of this hack and no any other? Why are they in particular danger this time?

        Most importantly, what’s happening in the real world during your movie? How do the secret service come after them, and what do they do about it? The key to selling a hacking movie is making sure people understand it’s not two hours of people sitting at keyboards. If you can emphasise the action-adventure component, it will be an easier sell…

        Penpusher Answered on December 27, 2012.
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          I haven’t. I will have to check it out.

          Default Answered on December 27, 2012.
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            Thanks!

            Default Answered on December 27, 2012.
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              I would change this to present tense. Instead of “has found themselves,” I would say, When they, “Find themselves”

              Singularity Answered on December 28, 2012.
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                I had it that way at first. It just didn’t sound right to me. I’m working on it….

                Default Answered on December 28, 2012.
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                  Ok..let’s try this one. Same story, different point of view.

                  After millions of bank account and pin numbers are stolen, special agent Mason Young must stop the hackers from bankrupting millions of Americans.”

                  Default Answered on December 30, 2012.
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                    I like this logline better than the one at the top.

                    Singularity Answered on December 30, 2012.
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                      Thank you.

                      Default Answered on December 30, 2012.
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