A cowardly parking office accidentally locks himself in the trunk of his car on his wedding day, but when the car is stolen with him in it, he must escape and get to the altar before the thieves realise he’s there.

    Samurai Posted on November 14, 2019 in Comedy.
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      “Officer” rather than “office” right?

      I love the start of this idea. I love the idea of a guy getting locked in the trunk of his car and the car is then stolen. BUT I think it would be better if he actually gets mixed up in whatever the thieves are up to. Once he’s actually escaped the car there’s no conflict (that I can see). There’s not a lot he can do in the trunk either so he needs to escape in order for his predicament to get worse then he needs to proactively do things to get out of these situations and ultimately get him to the alter.

      Look forward to seeing where this goes.

      Summitry Answered on November 14, 2019.
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        “Trapped in the trunk of his car on the most important day of his life, a cowardly parking officer has 3 hours to escape both the vehicle and the car thieves if he’s to marry the woman of his dreams.”

        Singularity Answered on November 30, 2019.

        Hey thanks for your feedback, that sounds like a better and more succinct logline. I’ll go with that one.

        on November 30, 2019.
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          Possible title: “Church on time”

          Singularity Answered on November 30, 2019.

          Hmm, may have a think about that one. Right now the main title is “Locked In”.

          on November 30, 2019.
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            A comedy version of Buried – if done well this could be fun.

            Comps for you: The Hangover meets Buried.

            Singularity Answered on December 1, 2019.
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