Dbdb4Penpusher Posted: November 25, 20192019-11-25T06:25:28+10:00 2019-11-25T06:25:28+10:00In: Drama A crush kindled comedienne and?a connection delusional fan influence a viral coma recovery star’s search for a tramatized teen A crush kindled comedienne and a connection delusional fan influence a viral coma recovery star’s search for a tramatized teen? Share Facebook 3 Reviews Voted Oldest Recent Richiev 61 Loglines 3,386 Reviews 307 Best Reviews 81,359 Points View Profile Best Answer Richiev Singularity 2019-11-25T10:19:53+10:00Added an answer on November 25, 2019 at 10:19 am You might have gotten a little too fancy with this one. 1: Not sure what is a “crush kindled comedienne” 2: connection delusional fan… do you mean a stalker? 3: “a viral coma recovery,” again I don’t know what this means In other words, after reading this logline, I still don’t know what the story is about 0 Share Share Share on Facebook Share on Twitter Share on LinkedIn Share on WhatsApp Mike Pedley United Kingdom (UK) 66 Loglines 610 Reviews 99 Best Reviews 50,931 Points View Profile Best Answer Mike Pedley Singularity 2019-11-25T19:18:14+10:00Added an answer on November 25, 2019 at 7:18 pm I’m with Richiev. I’m not even sure who the main character is. It seems as though the story is about a person who’s come out of a coma and they’re searching for a teenager – and this person has been influenced by the comedienne and her stalker…. Check out the formula to help with formatting and to understand what a logline is and how it works. Simple is better in a logline. We don’t need fancy descriptions… we just need something that tells us the story. 0 Share Share Share on Facebook Share on Twitter Share on LinkedIn Share on WhatsApp Dbdb4 4 Loglines 1 Review 1 Best Answer 81 Points View Profile Best Answer Dbdb4 Penpusher 2019-11-29T12:29:05+10:00Added an answer on November 29, 2019 at 12:29 pm Following the cessation of long-term life support,??the creative mind of an abused teen terrorized into a coma, anomalously wakes into viral internet stardom where he relies on a childhood girlfriend, a boyfriend delusional meth addict and pain escallating hallucination for rediscovery [img]https://loglines.org/wp-content/uploads/2019/11/201911191251501eec5f32ce80446d.jpg[/img][img]https://loglines.org/wp-content/uploads/2019/11/201911191251501eec5f32ce80446d-1.jpg[/img] 0 Share Share Share on Facebook Share on Twitter Share on LinkedIn Share on WhatsApp You must login to can add an answer. Username or email* Password* Captcha* Remember Me! Forgot Password?