A crush kindled comedienne and a connection delusional fan influence a viral coma recovery star’s search for a tramatized teen

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    A crush kindled comedienne and a connection delusional fan influence a viral coma recovery star’s search for a tramatized teen 

    Penpusher Posted on November 25, 2019 in Drama.
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      Following the cessation of long-term life support,  the creative mind of an abused teen terrorized into a coma, anomalously wakes into viral internet stardom where he relies on a childhood girlfriend, a boyfriend delusional meth addict and pain escallating hallucination for rediscovery

      RE: A crush kindled comedienne and a connection delusional fan influence a viral coma recovery star's search for a tramatized teen

      RE: A crush kindled comedienne and a connection delusional fan influence a viral coma recovery star's search for a tramatized teen

      Penpusher Answered on November 29, 2019.
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        You might have gotten a little too fancy with this one.

        1: Not sure what is a “crush kindled comedienne”

        2: connection delusional fan… do you mean a stalker?

        3: “a viral coma recovery,” again I don’t know what this means

        In other words, after reading this logline, I still don’t know what the story is about

        Singularity Answered on November 25, 2019.
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          I’m with Richiev.

          I’m not even sure who the main character is. It seems as though the story is about a person who’s come out of a coma and they’re searching for a teenager – and this person has been influenced by the comedienne and her stalker….

          Check out the formula to help with formatting and to understand what a logline is and how it works.

          Simple is better in a logline. We don’t need fancy descriptions… we just need something that tells us the story.

          Singularity Answered on November 25, 2019.
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