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JabousanPenpusher
Posted: November 2, 20212021-11-02T04:42:12+10:00 2021-11-02T04:42:12+10:00In: Television

A demoted FBI agent is sent on an administrative duty in a remote border town but, when a body is discovered, he tries to solve the mystery despite the reluctance of the local police and his boss.

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    1. kbfilmworks Samurai
      2021-11-02T17:57:58+10:00Added an answer on November 2, 2021 at 5:57 pm

      Nice set-up for your protagonist. Your logline really needs to address a highly dramatic action or obstacle along with a worthy antagonist to test your protagonist.

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    2. Jabousan Penpusher
      2021-11-02T21:19:04+10:00Added an answer on November 2, 2021 at 9:19 pm

      Thanks for the comment.
      This is a pilot for télévision. I suspect that I have mixed the logline for the Pilot and the logline for the Show unconsciously.
      Back to work …

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      • kbfilmworks Samurai
        2021-11-03T18:37:44+10:00Replied to answer on November 3, 2021 at 6:37 pm

        OK. Give us the logline for the pilot and obviously it needs to work as a standalone movie and also as a setup for the series. You’ll probably need 50-70 words to deliver all of this.

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