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Posted: June 6, 20172017-06-06T23:33:52+10:00 2017-06-06T23:33:52+10:00In: Thriller

A detective struggles to solve his partner?s murder finds himself hunted by two dirty cops believing he?s closing in on them for their murders.

A detective struggles to solve his partner?s murder finds himself hunted by two dirty cops believing he?s closing in on them for their murders.
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    1. Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
      2017-06-07T07:08:32+10:00Added an answer on June 7, 2017 at 7:08 am

      Captain,

      This reads a bit awkward, but probably won’t take much to fix. I’d start here and add a detail or 2.

      A ?detective struggles to uncover that his partner’s murder was an inside job carried out by his own co-workers.

      Good luck.

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