A down-to-earth teen couple must survive a nightmare abortion clinic to destroy the monster Chmanok.

    Chmanok (re-re-re-revisited)

    Logliner Posted on August 28, 2015 in Public.
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      WHY must they survive a nightmare abortion clinic?

      Samurai Answered on June 5, 2016.
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        What is a Chmanok and what does it have to do with an abortion clinic?

        Singularity Answered on August 28, 2015.
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          It’s a monster, as in “the monster Chmanok”.

          That’s just where it happens to be at the time.

          Logliner Answered on August 28, 2015.
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            It’s a monster, as in the monster Chmanok”.

            That’s just where it happens to be at the time.

            Logliner Answered on August 28, 2015.
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              Hello, I love the situation (teen couple in abortion clinic), but you must work a plot: what happens ? A monster (NEVER use names that means nothing in a logline) hunts them in the clinic ? What exacly is he inciting event ?

              Mentor Answered on August 28, 2015.
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                ‘Attacked by a mutant newborn calf, a reckless teen couple taking refuge in a nightmare abortion clinic must destroy its cursed guardian or remain trapped forever.’

                I know being attacked by a mutant newborn calf might not sound that threatening, but the ‘mutant’ part should indicate this is not your run of the mill easily dealt with petting zoo style farm animal… and hopefully this should come across.

                I mean, I could have gone with ‘after nearly being killed on their way to hospital’, but although this is the switch between ‘ordinary’ and ‘special world’, the mutant calf thing is the bigger indicator of ‘we’re through the looking glass, people’…

                Yeah, I’m rambling…

                Logliner Answered on August 29, 2015.
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