tony18Penpusher Asked: July 29, 20212021-07-29T01:07:31+10:00 2021-07-29T01:07:31+10:00In: SciFiA grieving father and his teenage daughter teams up with four other cadets to stop androids from invading Earth from an evil emperor.Hopeless City ShareFacebook2 ReviewsVotedOldestRecentOdie 4 Loglines 326 Reviews 33 Best Reviews 1,784 Points View Profile Odie Samurai 2021-07-29T05:45:48+10:00Added an answer on July 29, 2021 at 5:45 am Sounds cool, consider the following to strengthen your logline: 1. Why a father and daughter team to save the world? What’s makes them qualified? 2. You mentioned cadets, what kind of cadets are you referring to, and can your protag father being linked as their leader or teacher – hope you see where I’m going with this. 3. Who is your baddie (emperor) and what is his goal? Think about all the Sci-Fi shows we’ve seen, what makes this emperor and his minions unique?Keep going!1 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsApptony18 8 Loglines 5 Reviews 0 Best Reviews 20 Points View Profile tony18 Penpusher 2021-07-29T07:55:59+10:00Replied to answer on July 29, 2021 at 7:55 am 1) They have a great bond together. 2) They are space cadets. He is their leader. 3) The emperor wants the robots to invade the planet.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppYou must login to add an answer. Username or email* Password* Remember Me! Forgot Password?