A group therapy each of them for a different self control problem decide to take revenge after hearing the new member story.

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    Penpusher Posted on June 12, 2019 in Comedy.
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      This doesn’t read properly. I’m confused as to what the story is actually about. Check out the “Our formula” tab for help with formatting.

      My questions that I have currently:

        1. Who’s the protagonist?
        2. Who is getting revenge against who and how?
        3. How is this a comedy?

      Once this logline is in a more conventional format, and at the very least provides answers to 1 & 2 above, it will be easier to offer more feedback.

      Fwiw, I do like what I think is the idea behind this. I need more information to understand it better though.

      Overlord Answered on June 12, 2019.

      How can i eddit it ?

      on June 12, 2019.

      There’s a little pencil icon if you hover over your logline. Click that and it will allow you to edit it. Please add this version in a comment too so future users can see the evolution.

      on June 12, 2019.
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