thedarkhorseMentor Posted: November 8, 20192019-11-08T19:08:21+10:00 2019-11-08T19:08:21+10:00In: FamilyA lone wolf con artist seduces a woman by pretending to be someone else, but must first spend Christmas with her family, whom he grows to love.– ShareFacebook4 ReviewsVotedOldestRecentthedarkhorse 99 Loglines 274 Reviews 16 Best Reviews 6,275 Points View Profile thedarkhorse Mentor 2019-11-08T19:09:40+10:00Added an answer on November 8, 2019 at 7:09 pm On second thought, “Lone wolf” might be the wrong word.But you guys can see the arc, right?He goes from loner/loveless/cold/materialistic to genuine/humble/decent/selfless, etc. If not I need a better word ha.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppMichael Fine 12 Loglines 19 Reviews 1 Best Answer 213 Points View Profile Michael Fine Logliner 2019-11-09T06:45:36+10:00Added an answer on November 9, 2019 at 6:45 am I think this is the strongest logline of all your variations. It focuses more on the dilemma of the protag (i.e.: will he continue conning once he loves this family?) more than the?nature of the con (i.e.: He has an?attachment-free lifestyle, and she is?wholesome), and I like that angle more than the clash of individual personalities between the protag and his “love.” I think it’s a better story.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppthedarkhorse 99 Loglines 274 Reviews 16 Best Reviews 6,275 Points View Profile thedarkhorse Mentor 2019-11-09T21:44:29+10:00Added an answer on November 9, 2019 at 9:44 pm Hi Mike,Thanks – I’m tempted to go forward with this one.I just hope the intention and obstacle are both strong enough.Yeah – it’s the dilemma I want to be the thing that attracts you as opposed to the other things going on (snowstorm, cops on his tail, etc).Carved down to its essence, this is the film I had in mind.Does this logline conjure up all the right images in your head??0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppthedarkhorse 99 Loglines 274 Reviews 16 Best Reviews 6,275 Points View Profile thedarkhorse Mentor 2019-11-11T20:10:24+10:00Added an answer on November 11, 2019 at 8:10 pm INTENTION: To live a real life… To be with her… To get out of the game.OBSTACLE: His life with the woman is founded on lies. Perhaps his past life/the real one is coming back to destroy him? (Cops… Old friends…etc.)?Perhaps he has trust issues? Has a hard time letting anyone in?0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppYou must login to can add an answer. Username or email* Password* Remember Me! Forgot Password?