A long-distance couple on opposite sides of the globe trying to keep their failing relationship alive through the use of a brand-new virtual reality technology encounter problems  when they begin to lose sight of what’s real and what’s not.

    Logliner Posted on August 20, 2019 in SciFi.
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      It’s a good premise. I’m interested, but you don’t give me enough meat to sink my teeth into. I don’t get hooked.

      The VR I can imagine and it sounds cool. They have simulated dates, sim sexual encounters, even a sim family.

      And when they log out, they are back to their lonely physical realities.

      What I don’t see in the logline is the direction towards which the complication (confusing VR with R) takes the story. I get that they confuse reality with VR, since their perfect VR dates become addictive, but how does this manifest as a story progression?

      I struggle to come up with ideas about it, so I certainly hope you have some yourself. I want to get hooked.

      By the way, wasn’t the b-story in Inception similar (other than that his wife was dead)? Perhaps the fact that a similar story makes enough screentime for another movie’s b-story only should make us think that your concept needs more meat.

      Mentor Answered on August 22, 2019.
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        Interesting. Will definitely want to see it

        Penpusher Answered on August 24, 2019.
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