When the royal lookalike he’s babysitting turns out to be the real Queen Elizabeth, a low-level ceremonial guard must assume the highest responsibility in the land when European Terrorists take over Buckingham Palace.

GTW Penpusher Asked on March 14, 2019 in Comedy.
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You end your logline where it should begin.
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“When the lookalike he must protect from terrorist turns out to be the real Queen Elizabeth, a low-level ceremonial guard must traverse Buckingham’s vast underground passageways while fighting jihadist, in order to get her majesty to safety.”

Richiev Singularity Reviewed on March 14, 2019.

I have to agree with you, that’s a good note. Although the terrorists I should say are European, not jihadists.

They’re French. In the UK, the enemy is always French.

on March 18, 2019.
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Cute.  The lookalike part sounds like a detail for the script. For the logline, the hook is this lowly guy having to protect the queen. Or clarify how the lookalike part matters beyond the setup.

Robb Ross Samurai Reviewed on March 15, 2019.
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