A man blackmails a young woman he’ll inform the shelter and care program about her ongoing drug habit, leaving her homeless, unless she becomes his mistress.
I don’t think the stakes are high enough to keep her compliant on a long term basis. Plus, as his mistress she would have many opportunities to kill him.
In ‘Blue Velvet’, a deranged extortionist (Dennis Hopper) kidnaps a child in order to force the drug-addicted mother to become his mistress. Obviously, for the mother to submit she must be convinced this guy would have no qualms about killing a child.
INTENTION: to blackmail a woman into becoming his mistress.
I think this might work better from the woman’s angle. Let’s try it out…
INTENTION: get clean? get her life back together?
OBSTACLE: her drug habit – which is ruining her life in more ways than one.
A woman trying to get life back together is blackmailed into sex by a man who threatens to inform her shelter and care program about her secret drug habit.
What do you think is the obstacle from the man’s angle? What’s standing in his way?
Intention and obstacle both need to be strong and specific.