A man exploits his friends cocaine habit to finish a script by a deadline.

    OlDustyDogg Penpusher Asked on August 5, 2018 in Comedy.
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      After his deadline is unexpectedly brought forward, a washed up screenwriter snorts his friend’s finest Colombian nose-candy in a bid to finish the script in 24 hours.

      mikepedley85 Mentor Reviewed on August 7, 2018.

      Zing! I like that. but I’m so green I like too much.  still learning to zone in.  BUT with that I see all sorts of fun… he hopes he’ll earn enough with his script to pay for the blow and keep his links in the industry.  Could be tense if his friend is just a grunt dealer at the bottom with a lot to lose.

      on August 9, 2018.
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        The End

        Richiev Singularity Reviewed on August 6, 2018.
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          This is more of a marketing line.

          Desparate to meet his deadline a writer is out of his depth trying get cocaine to feed his addicted more talented friend cocaine to write the screenplay.

          We need some action to understand the story.

          CraigDGriffiths Summitry Reviewed on August 6, 2018.

          This log line was a test to see what kind of feedback i would get for an obviously unfinished log line.  Thank you for the good feedback.

          on August 6, 2018.
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            How? Why?
            Will he use some of his friend’s drugs himself or get his friend to write it for him? The basic mechanics of the action aren’t clear.

            Nir Shelter Singularity Reviewed on August 7, 2018.
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