saurin desaiPenpusher Asked: June 4, 20212021-06-04T19:00:49+10:00 2021-06-04T19:00:49+10:00In: ExamplesA music teacher has a fatal accident, just as he was to achieve his dream of playing jazz professionally, and lands in the ‘Great Before’, from where he desperately tries to find his way back to his body.Movie: Soul (Pixar) ShareFacebook2 ReviewsVotedOldestRecentOdie 4 Loglines 370 Reviews 36 Best Reviews 1,927 Points View Profile Odie Samurai 2021-06-10T02:03:41+10:00Added an answer on June 10, 2021 at 2:03 am Great movie. Concerning the logline, multiple comma usage is generally frowned upon. Try to reconstruct with no commas – would be a fun logline challenge.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppsaurin desai 3 Loglines 5 Reviews 0 Best Reviews 27 Points View Profile saurin desai Penpusher 2021-06-24T23:55:13+10:00Replied to answer on June 24, 2021 at 11:55 pm Thank you, Odie, for your review and your inputs. I was unaware that multiple commas are frowned upon in loglines.Here’s a slightly revised version: A music teacher who is about to achieve his dream of playing jazz professionally has a fatal accident and lands in the ‘Great Before’ from where he desperately tries to find his way back to his body.Regards0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppYou must login to add an answer. Username or email* Password* Remember Me! Forgot Password?