A NASA space drone pilot discovers a mysterious wormhole in space that could lead to preventing the deaths of his family three years previously.

    Logliner Posted on September 4, 2019 in SciFi.
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      “When he discovers a wormhole in space that could prevent the deaths of his family three years prior, a NASA drone pilot must…” (Then tell us what he does about it)

      Singularity Answered on September 5, 2019.
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        Richiev:

        When he discovers a wormhole in space that could prevent the deaths of his family three years prior, a NASA drone pilot must… (Then tell us what he does about it)

        I agree with Richiev. You miss the 3rd element of the logline, the ACTION (see the formula, here).

        CHARACTER: a NASA drone pilot.
        EVENT: He discovers a wormhole.
        ACTION: He has to send the drone into the hole.

        Wait, what? Why is he a drone pilot? Major McConaughey must get his own ass in the hole. Otherwise what is the big deal about this movie’s action?

        Mentor Answered on September 7, 2019.
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