Test your logline here before spending months in development. This is not a contest, there are no prizes. However, you WILL get invaluable help in sharpening your concept and refining your logline. Make sure to start here.
My question; is the story about the private investigator protecting the ‘man’ or is it about him finding the ‘man’?
One of those two elements should be dropped from the logline because it is adding to the confusion.