A private investigator who tracks people by dowsing must protect the man a vicious client hires him to find, as they may hold a clue to the origin of his abilities.

Tigrisian Penpusher Asked on March 14, 2018 in Drama.
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who are “they”?

variable Overlord Reviewed on March 14, 2018.

‘They’ means the man they have to protect – is the way it’s phrased too confusing or just plain grammatically incorrect?

on March 14, 2018.

why should he bother with the origin of his abilities?

on March 14, 2018.

I think the confusion is that ‘they’ means two or more,  ‘he’ would mean a single man.

on March 14, 2018.
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My question; is the story about the private investigator protecting the ‘man’ or is it about him finding the ‘man’?
One of those two elements should be dropped from the logline because it is adding to the confusion.

Richiev Singularity Reviewed on March 14, 2018.
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Also, who is does the ‘man’ need protecting from?

Richiev Singularity Reviewed on March 14, 2018.
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When a private investigator with paranormal ability is hired by a vicious Mafia boss to track a fugitive, he then vows to help the man in exchange for information on his own origin.

Valentin Samurai Reviewed on March 20, 2018.
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