KnightriderMentor Posted: August 2, 20192019-08-02T14:13:04+10:00 2019-08-02T14:13:04+10:00In: SciFi A stressed out business exec takes up meditation for relief, only to have visions of his employees miserable lives should his failing business go under MindfullNess Share Facebook 1 Review Voted Oldest Recent Mike Pedley United Kingdom (UK) 66 Loglines 613 Reviews 99 Best Reviews 50,938 Points View Profile Mike Pedley Singularity 2019-08-02T19:02:40+10:00Added an answer on August 2, 2019 at 7:02 pm This seems like just the inciting incident to me, what is he going to do about it? What’s his goal? When his stress-relieving meditation gives him premonitions of his employees’ miserable lives should his business fail, a XXXXX XXXXX must… He’s doing something to combat stress = he’s stressed They’re his employees and it’s his business = business exec This leaves plenty of scope to describe the main character in a new way so we get even more information about who he is. Hope this helps. 0 Share Share Share on Facebook Share on Twitter Share on LinkedIn Share on WhatsApp You must login to can add an answer. Username or email* Password* Captcha* Remember Me! Forgot Password?