A stressed out business exec takes up meditation for relief, only to have visions of his employees miserable lives should his failing business go under


    Mentor Posted on August 2, 2019 in SciFi.
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      This seems like just the inciting incident to me, what is he going to do about it? What’s his goal?

      When his stress-relieving meditation gives him premonitions of his employees’ miserable lives should his business fail, a XXXXX XXXXX must…

      He’s doing something to combat stress = he’s stressed
      They’re his employees and it’s his business = business exec

      This leaves plenty of scope to describe the main character in a new way so we get even more information about who he is.

      Hope this helps.

      Summitry Answered on August 2, 2019.
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