The logline positions the inheritance as the inciting event, but it's really the first instance of a possessed doll attacking...
Think of your reads reaction. Okay, she’s training cool.
It could just be a huge training montage.
She’s already strong, so what are we going to watch?
What differentiates this from Wonder Woman?
I was thinking a newer and hopefully better version of Harry Potter.
This needs work. Like for sure.
But I’m getting there. I think I know what I want this one to be.
You should give us an event that takes place sooner than ‘eons ago’What prompts this girl, at this time, to fight the gods?
You should put her at risk. Make it so her life or the life of someone she loves is in imminent danger.