a terminally ill man sets out to take revenge on people from his past. But to his frustration they are dying before he can get to them.
What’s the genre? It could be better as a dark comedy.
I miss a clear inciting incident. Maybe the illness?
And what kind of conflit could fuel the story?
When a small burocrate is diagnosed of a deadly brain cancer, he sets out to take revenge on people from his past only to find they’re all already dead.
Some people (my brother included) say that there is freedom to cancer. Having a reduced future frees you to do what you want. This guy is an up tight person who snaps and let’s go. It is a comedy. I have a series of ideas I am yet to string together.