A troubled boy, on the run from the law and terribly injured, will be saved after he receives a transplant of the world?s most special heart. But his destiny and all that comes with it will be hard earned as he fights his incredible transformation in every way he can.
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A troubled boy, on the run from the law and terribly injured, will be saved after he receives a transplant of the world?s most special heart. But his destiny and all that comes with it will be hard earned as he fights his incredible transformation in every way he can.
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Sorry it’s too vague to help at the moment.
Special heart?
Life transformation?
How does a run away get a heart transplant.
I am guessing that the special heart makes him famous or turns him into a nice guy.
Tells us what happens and we can help more.
Is this an origin episode for a new superhero series (franchise)?
Agreed with Craig, this lacks too many details for the plot to be clear. It also is too long and includes many redundant descriptions.
I suggest starting from scratch by answering the following question; what does the boy want and why? Include in the logline only the answer to this question.
Nir is more concise and correct. At a guess his goal/want is not to change. His he now famous because of this special heart and that leads to expectations. Be specific, it is your friend.
With the police hot on his trail for a crime he didn’t commit,?a mortally wounded?misunderstood youth?races against time?to locate someone terminally ill with his rare blood type and willing to donate their heart.