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Posted: January 6, 20222022-01-06T10:13:40+10:00 2022-01-06T10:13:40+10:00In: Adventure

A princess who kills an important general to rescue another girl must hope her former enemies will accept her after her escape, now wanted dead or alive.

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    1. Odie Samurai
      2022-01-11T08:05:36+10:00Added an answer on January 11, 2022 at 8:05 am

      Consider the following:
      A princess in what land? A worldbuilder can help the reader envision your premise.
      Can “an important general” be the captain of the guards or royal castle guards – you get the idea.
      Who is this girl? E.g., a wrongfully accused servant.
      What is their quest that lands them in a rival kingdom?

      Hope you find this constructive, take care.

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