A young male prostitute preys on older women during the summer of love, robbing and killing them after sex until he falls in love with one who he uses to suppress his dark urges.

    Mentor Posted on November 9, 2017 in Horror.
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      It seems to me the situation is timeless.  It could be set anywhere at any time. Why select the summer of love? (Which entails a bigger budget for time period props, costumes and location dressing.)

      Singularity Answered on November 9, 2017.
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        Story is conflict
        What is the main conflict?

        Singularity Answered on November 9, 2017.
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          It sounds as though the inciting incident is when a serial killer falls in love, but what is he going to do about it? What is his goal as a result of falling in love?

          Singularity Answered on November 9, 2017.
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            I’d say we need to state the goal up front.

            After falling in love with his next victim a serial killer uses his new feeling to try and defeat his dark urges.

            Summitry Answered on November 11, 2017.

            Does she know? Is he doing a 12 step program? Is there flavour we can add.

            on November 11, 2017.
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