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Posted: November 20, 20212021-11-20T07:17:08+10:00 2021-11-20T07:17:08+10:00In: Comedy

A young woman decides to follow her sister’s footsteps into the music industry gets derailed when she gets in a car accident.

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    1. tschrack Penpusher
      2021-11-22T04:00:54+10:00Added an answer on November 22, 2021 at 4:00 am

      Anything you could describe the young woman as, instead of young, that alludes to a flaw that will be fixed? What caused her to decide? The logline reads more like an inciting incident/catalyst than a logline itself. It might start something like “When a delusional songwriter gets in a car accident, she has to x to avoid y or z will happen.

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        2021-11-23T04:08:57+10:00Replied to answer on November 23, 2021 at 4:08 am

        She has to stop using drugs or alcohol to avoid her having career derailed or record labels avoid her will happen.

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