antonio3Penpusher Asked: November 20, 20212021-11-20T07:17:08+10:00 2021-11-20T07:17:08+10:00In: ComedyA young woman decides to follow her sister’s footsteps into the music industry gets derailed when she gets in a car accident.Project Daisy ShareFacebook2 ReviewsVotedOldestRecenttschrack 2 Loglines 11 Reviews 0 Best Reviews 41 Points View Profile tschrack Penpusher 2021-11-22T04:00:54+10:00Added an answer on November 22, 2021 at 4:00 am Anything you could describe the young woman as, instead of young, that alludes to a flaw that will be fixed? What caused her to decide? The logline reads more like an inciting incident/catalyst than a logline itself. It might start something like “When a delusional songwriter gets in a car accident, she has to x to avoid y or z will happen.1 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppantonio3 13 Loglines 12 Reviews 0 Best Reviews 20 Points View Profile antonio3 Penpusher 2021-11-23T04:08:57+10:00Replied to answer on November 23, 2021 at 4:08 am She has to stop using drugs or alcohol to avoid her having career derailed or record labels avoid her will happen.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppYou must login to add an answer. Username or email* Password* Remember Me! Forgot Password?