jamesmichaelPenpusher Posted: April 9, 20122012-04-09T04:30:11+10:00 2012-04-09T04:30:11+10:00"A young woman has to protect two children as they desperately try to escape a man with a fractured mind."Winter Hill ShareFacebook1 ReviewVotedOldestRecent 7 Loglines 217 Reviews 0 Best Reviews 0 Points View Profile [Deleted User] 2012-04-10T11:07:29+10:00Added an answer on April 10, 2012 at 11:07 am It sounds like the real goal here is for the woman to help the kids ESCAPE, not protect them. Otherwise it’s open ended, which is not good.And how did they get stuck with the psycho? There’s room for an inciting incident in this logline.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppYou must login to can add an answer. Username or email* Password* Remember Me! Forgot Password?