"A young woman is desperate to find out whether her step-father murdered her clinically depressed mother. But the only person who knows the truth is a killer himself…"
Dave: “It’s a little unclear and there are 4 characters which makes it difficult to see where it’s focus is. The young woman is the central character but ‘desperate to find out’ is not a goal that the character can achieve. There is an antagonist, the killer, but I don’t see how it could be linked.”