Able to wink only, paralyzed, but slowly recovering man agrees to sexual plays with a jealous nurse, but now he has to fight his helplessness, as he must stop her before she kills him and his family.

    Helplessness

    Samurai Posted on December 14, 2013 in Public.
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      I think the premise has possibilities. But the logline raises as many questions in my mind as it answers. Such as:

      Why would the nurse be jealous of a paralyzed man?

      How could he communicate to her about sex — let alone engage in it — when he’s 99.9% paralyzed?

      And while the hanky-panky may be a part of they story, I’m not sure it’s necessary to include in the logline. A logline should focus on the principal action which is murder, not sex.

      Singularity Answered on December 16, 2013.
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        There’s information in the logline that distracts from the premise, which, if I’ve read it correctly, is this:

        A temporarily paralyzed man on the mend must fight his sense of helplessness to stop his mentally unstable nurse from killing him and his family.

        Default Answered on December 17, 2013.
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          Thank you guys. I got your points. LincWilder you nailed it. I think that I can actually use that

          Samurai Answered on December 17, 2013.
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