kskeetePenpusher Posted: August 12, 20192019-08-12T05:05:42+10:00 2019-08-12T05:05:42+10:00In: ThrillerAfter a tragic death puts her family in financial jeopardy, a disgraced athlete partners with an old childhood friend to execute an insurance scheme that puts her on the wrong end of a revenge plot.– ShareFacebook4 ReviewsVotedOldestRecentRichiev 61 Loglines 3,389 Reviews 307 Best Reviews 81,369 Points View ProfileBest Answer Richiev Singularity 2019-08-12T08:44:58+10:00Added an answer on August 12, 2019 at 8:44 am “After the tragic death of (Her father?) a disgraced athlete partners with a childhood friend to scam the insurance company which puts them on the wrong end of a revenge plot by (A ruthless insurance agent?)”0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppLeeMilby 0 Loglines 1 Review 1 Best Answer 91 Points View ProfileBest Answer LeeMilby Penpusher 2019-08-12T10:56:18+10:00Added an answer on August 12, 2019 at 10:56 am Definitely sounds interesting! Curious to know what kind of athlete she is. Potentially could make the log even more intriguing0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppdpg 105 Loglines 5,523 Reviews 556 Best Reviews 111,842 Points View ProfileBest Answer dpg Singularity 2019-08-13T02:39:17+10:00Added an answer on August 13, 2019 at 2:39 am >>>After a tragic death puts her family in financial jeopardy,Who and how so? Because of medical bills not covered by insurance?? Please clarify.>>>disgraced athlete What kind of athlete? Basketball, football, or…?? Professional or…?>>>partners with an old childhood friend to execute an insurance scheme that puts her on the wrong end of a revenge plot. This sends mixed signals as to what is the story about.? What is the main dramatic question of the plot?? Is it about a scam or revenge?? If the latter, what does the insurance scam have to do with getting revenge?The logline would benefit by being more specific and having a clearer focus. I suggest you run it through the logline generator app. The app is still in beta, but it’s a useful tool in shaping and sharpening a logline.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppjaheagle 8 Loglines 4 Reviews 3 Best Reviews 201 Points View ProfileBest Answer jaheagle Logliner 2019-08-14T13:20:31+10:00Added an answer on August 14, 2019 at 1:20 pm Was the tragic death a family member or an accident that puts the family in financial jeopardy? Does the tragic death have anything to do with the athlete being disgraced? Is it necessary in the logline to mention partnering with a childhood friend? These are just a few questions that may need clarifying.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppYou must login to can add an answer. Username or email* Password* Remember Me! Forgot Password?