savinh0Samurai Asked: July 18, 20192019-07-18T06:56:51+10:00 2019-07-18T06:56:51+10:00In: RomanceAfter an outsider college clique finds that a young magic poet can write love poems that make every woman fall in love with them, they kidnap the guy, only to find out that real love has to be mutual.– ShareFacebook4 ReviewsVotedOldestRecentRichiev 64 Loglines 3,473 Reviews 306 Best Reviews 81,779 Points View ProfileBest Answer Richiev Singularity 2019-07-18T07:55:31+10:00Added an answer on July 18, 2019 at 7:55 am You need a lead character, And the lead character needs to be in head over heels in love. That love should mean the entire world to the lead characterAnd also, for this logline/story to work, the audience needs to feel that love. It has to come acrossThen the audience will sort of understand why the lead character who is love-struck might kidnap the poet.Because there is a real-world consequence for kidnapping.? You have to make it believable that someone is so in love they risk years in prison just to win the love of their life.Also, don’t tell us the ending in the logline.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppRichiev 64 Loglines 3,473 Reviews 306 Best Reviews 81,779 Points View ProfileBest Answer Richiev Singularity 2019-07-18T08:25:16+10:00Added an answer on July 18, 2019 at 8:25 am One more thing, if you want to go the ‘other’ direction with this movie. Then you should use the word, ‘attraction’ and not ‘love’In other words, the poet can make it so the opposite sex is ‘attracted’ to you. They will fawn over every word, even sleep with you.But he can’t make them fall in love with you.So, you can have all meaningless sex you want, but you can’t have true love.True love needs free will.In this scenario. The lead would think all he wants is every girl he meets to want him, but what he finds he really needs is true love.However, this scenario has a very big problem. Because the lead character is basically giving the girls a magical rufie, and the story would have serious “Me Too’ issues.?0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppdpg 105 Loglines 5,557 Reviews 556 Best Reviews 112,194 Points View ProfileBest Answer dpg Singularity 2019-07-18T08:42:06+10:00Added an answer on July 18, 2019 at 8:42 am I suggest the premise be re-engineered from top to bottom.It’s not magic.? The poet has? a natural gift for writing poems that make women swoon.? But he is utterly tongue-tied in face-to-face encounters.He’s not kidnapped.? Rather he monetizes his gift via a web service. He writes prose and poems for lonely hearts on web dating sites.? It’s a lucrative gig.And then (inciting incident) he falls hopelessly in love with one of women a client has hired him to woo.IOW: do an updated version of the Cyrano de Bergerac story.FWIW0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppRichiev 64 Loglines 3,473 Reviews 306 Best Reviews 81,779 Points View ProfileBest Answer Richiev Singularity 2019-07-19T12:31:43+10:00Added an answer on July 19, 2019 at 12:31 pm “When the woman he connects with on social media shows up unannounced, a shy but good-hearted romantic must find a way to win her heart when she mistakenly believes his good looking roommate (Whose picture he used) is the man she fell in love with.”Title: Love me Tinder(Or reverse it so the lead is a shy woman who has a good looking roommate if you would prefer a female protagonist)0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppYou must login to add an answer. Username or email* Password* Remember Me! Forgot Password?