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Posted: July 14, 20162016-07-14T08:17:03+10:00 2016-07-14T08:17:03+10:00In: Thriller

After being attacked by a distressed mother of an obsessed fan, a girl band must escape their dressing room without being killed.

After being attacked by a distressed mother of an obsessed fan, a girl band must escape their dressing room without being killed.
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    1. dpg Singularity
      2016-07-14T10:20:54+10:00Added an answer on July 14, 2016 at 10:20 am

      Power up a cell phone. ?Call 911.

      FADE OUT:?
      CREDIT ROLL

      Sorry, but I just don’t see what the complications are, the ?jeopardy that can be stretched out and escalated for the length of a feature film. ?Or is this for a short?

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    2. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2016-07-14T12:11:40+10:00Added an answer on July 14, 2016 at 12:11 pm

      Agreed with DPG.

      I think you may need to have the mother hold the band hostage, this way she can take away their mobiles and cut them off from contacting the outside world by any other means.

      I also think that this could make for a comedy, crazy I know, but think of the princes like preciousness such divas could be imbued in. In a life or death situation they’re like totes OMG LOL attitudes could be funny.
      Just saying?

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    3. CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
      2016-07-15T07:34:49+10:00Added an answer on July 15, 2016 at 7:34 am

      I see a funny contained horror. Is the attack keeping them in the room. Is the attack the story? Because you have written it like two separate events. If it is a continuum try something like.

      Trapped by the murderius mother of an obsessed fan a girl band must escape their dressing room to survive.

      Hope this helps.

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    4. dpg Singularity
      2016-07-15T11:48:35+10:00Added an answer on July 15, 2016 at 11:48 am

      Could work as a comedy. ?But the designated genre is thriller.

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