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IvyEight6Penpusher
Posted: August 5, 20222022-08-05T06:12:56+10:00 2022-08-05T06:12:56+10:00In: Fantasy

After getting a stuffed yak as a birthday present, a young Tibetan girl discovers that it turns into a real one.

After getting a stuffed yak as a birthday present, a young Tibetan girl discovers that it turns into a real one.
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    1. Philippe Le Miere Logliner
      2022-08-09T06:51:14+10:00Added an answer on August 9, 2022 at 6:51 am

      Fantasy or Comedy? … Made me laugh! 🙂

      “a young Tibetan girl” = protagonist

      “stuffed yak transforms into a real one” = inciting incident

      What might be the main character’s goal?

      If we unpack Pinocchio, here we have a toy, transforming into a real one, but it is the story of the toy’s misadventures. Or then there’s ‘Pygmalion and Galatea’, a love story, where a sculpture transforms into a real, beautiful woman.

      While ‘Tibetan’ has cultural stereotypes, such as the practice of Buddhism, another suggestion might be to additionally reflect on the psychology of the girl. A single adjective, such as shy, courage, or intelligent, could give a clue as to how she might react to the unfolding adventures before her.

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      • IvyEight6 Penpusher
        2022-08-09T11:01:47+10:00Replied to answer on August 9, 2022 at 11:01 am

        1) She is from either Bhutan or Nepal.
        2) She is shy.
        3) She must protect him from being hurt.

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        • Philippe Le Miere Logliner
          2022-08-10T06:38:28+10:00Replied to answer on August 10, 2022 at 6:38 am

          “When a shy Tibetan girl, discovers her stuffed yak birthday present is alive, she must … protect him from being hurt ( by … who? why?) ”

          By introducing a villain, potentially more tension is created, forming empathy for the lead, and imaginative adventure for the reader.

          Brainstormed ideas:
          – who gives the present?
          – why are they giving it?
          – is it magical, religious, … science experiement?

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