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Jesus Franco ManeraPenpusher
Posted: September 28, 20222022-09-28T05:59:50+10:00 2022-09-28T05:59:50+10:00In: Horror

After having her first same-sex encounter, a young girl is being attacked by a masked killer.

This is for a exploitation horror short film

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    1. FilmMaker Penpusher
      2022-09-29T00:56:17+10:00Added an answer on September 29, 2022 at 12:56 am

      It is a bit lacklustre; we’re not told much about the young girl; what does her having her first same-sex experience have to do with the rest of the logline? Seems as though it was thrown in there for some sort of plot without thinking it through. It doesn’t tell us much, just a generic horror/teen movie logline without the personality.

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