After her arranged husband separates her from her piano, a mute pianist must earn her piano back one key at a time by giving lessons to the man who bought it and who secretly loves her.

    The Piano

    Singularity Posted on May 14, 2016 in Examples.
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      My take:

      When her new husband trades away her beloved piano for land, a mute pianist must earn it back one key at a time by giving lessons to the new owner who secretly loves her.
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      I inserted “beloved” to highlight the intensity of her emotional attachment to the piano, ┬áher desperate need to get it back.

      Singularity Answered on May 14, 2016.
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        Logline for The Piano.

        Singularity Answered on May 14, 2016.
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          Yes good point.

          The piano is her only connection to the world in the beginning so it does need to be emphasised in the logline.

          Singularity Answered on May 15, 2016.
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            Nice logline. Could you review mine it should be the newest one. Im working on the script for mine

            Penpusher Answered on May 22, 2016.
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