A better way to word this would be: "When she is sent to new mental health facility, an emotional vulnerable...
given that audience is aware of the infamous vampire-werewolf vendetta
title: love bites
“When she falls in love with a werewolf, and orthodox vampire must convince her traditional family to accept him.”
I like the concept.
This could be a fantasy version of “Look who’s coming to dinner”
(You should study Jewish law and customs and then utilize them into you created vampire culture)
That’s great advice I’ll be super glad to do the suggested research Thanks man
PS. You made my day!
I watched “Look who’s coming to dinner” today. A bit more inactive drama than its fantasy version could incorporate but I got a real good sense of the type of complications that can arise in such a situation…
If you’re going to play the Jewish schtick…
When an ultra-orthodox vampire falls in love with a worldly, reformed werewolf, she must convince her traditional family to accept him. (21 words)
feels like you are stretching the plot to its elastic limit, to generate the sharpest note! Great!
worldly, reformed werewolf is a brilliant idea..
Good one. But I think your story is crossing paths with ‘Underworld’ movie. I m no one to judge as I don’t know your whole idea. Once check it.
Very useful suggestion, I’ll look more into it. Thanks ashes123!
I got the gist from Wikipedia for Underworld (2003)
It’s completely different (luckily) Thanks anyways…