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Asked: April 7, 20182018-04-07T04:58:15+10:00 2018-04-07T04:58:15+10:00In: Fantasy

After her big crush reveals himself as a werewolf, a vampire girl must find a way around her orthodox family to get together

given that audience is aware of the infamous vampire-werewolf vendetta

title: love bites

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    1. Richiev

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      2018-04-07T05:06:59+10:00Added an answer on April 7, 2018 at 5:06 am

      “When she falls in love with a werewolf, and orthodox vampire must convince her traditional family to accept him.”

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      2018-04-07T05:08:43+10:00Added an answer on April 7, 2018 at 5:08 am

      I like the concept.

      This could be a fantasy version of “Look who’s coming to dinner”

      (You should study Jewish?law and customs and then utilize them into you created vampire culture)

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      2018-04-07T05:59:57+10:00Added an answer on April 7, 2018 at 5:59 am

      Good one. But I think your story is crossing paths with ‘Underworld’ movie. I m no one to judge as I don’t know your whole idea. Once check it.

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      2018-04-07T07:39:53+10:00Added an answer on April 7, 2018 at 7:39 am

      If you’re going? to play the Jewish schtick…

      When an ultra-orthodox vampire falls in love with a worldly, reformed werewolf,? she must convince her traditional family to accept him.
      (21 words)

      fwiw

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