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After her fathers’ death, a guilt-ridden athlete hires a hitman to execute her own murder to pay off the family debt but struggles with the consequences of her deadly decision after meeting an inquisitive kid.
I can understand why she would grieve the death of her father, but why is she feeling guilty? And what’s prevents her from calling off her executioner? And she if she couldn’t pay off the debt, where did she get the money to hire the hit man?