GeschwindtPenpusher Asked: February 8, 20212021-02-08T06:12:51+10:00 2021-02-08T06:12:51+10:00In: CrimeAfter his first felony conviction, an impulsive steelworker struggles to regain his family’s trust despite his dishonest dealings as a burglar.Any And All, 1 hr television pilot, based on Uncommon Life: Safecracker Chronicles ShareFacebook4 ReviewsVotedOldestRecentRichiev 64 Loglines 3,546 Reviews 309 Best Reviews 82,025 Points View Profile Richiev Singularity 2021-02-09T12:47:57+10:00Added an answer on February 9, 2021 at 12:47 pm This logline is both solid and succinct. While normally I am not a fan of the word ‘Struggles,’ the logline absolutely gets across the lead character’s goal of earning back the trust of his family after letting them down.If you decide to change anything, don’t change much. Keep it as it is, or minor tweaks at best.1 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppOdie 4 Loglines 254 Reviews 26 Best Reviews 1,558 Points View Profile Odie Samurai 2021-02-11T05:08:46+10:00Replied to answer on February 11, 2021 at 5:08 am Yup, if you boil it down you have “A convicted burglar struggles to regain his family’s trust”. I get the struggle can be ACT II but have to admit this variant popped in my head “A convicted burglar must regain his family’s trust in order to steal their inheritance” 😉.2 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppNovomir 2 Loglines 6 Reviews 0 Best Reviews 31 Points View Profile Novomir Penpusher 2021-02-14T02:32:14+10:00Replied to answer on February 14, 2021 at 2:32 am The stakes must be high. What happens if he can’t make peace with his family? The decorate goal raises the stakes. It is best when it is a matter of life and death. Like, after past criminal cases, he screwed up, and you need to pay back the debt.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppNovomir 2 Loglines 6 Reviews 0 Best Reviews 31 Points View Profile Novomir Penpusher 2021-02-14T02:50:10+10:00Replied to answer on February 14, 2021 at 2:50 am The series “sneaky Pete” took this idea as a basis, and showed it in its own way.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppYou must login to add an answer. Username or email* Password* Remember Me! Forgot Password?