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Asked: April 24, 20202020-04-24T16:50:16+10:00 2020-04-24T16:50:16+10:00In: Examples

After losing the love of his life in the streets of India, a homeless teenager participates in the TV show? Who wants to be a millionaire to find her again.Film: Slumdog Millionaire (2008)(30 words)

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    1. Mike Pedley

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      2020-04-26T19:59:45+10:00Added an answer on April 26, 2020 at 7:59 pm

      I think you need to make it clear why going on the tv show will help find her again. Your second version hints at how his experiences relate but there’s a bit of disconnect in my opinion.

      A homeless teenager’s life in the Mumbai slums help him through the rounds of Who Wants To Be A Millionaire, but all he wants is TV exposure to help him find the girl he loves. ?(35 words)

      It’s understanding why he wants to go on the show that’s crucial. It’s a tricky one though as it’s told through flashbacks and you don’t discover his goal until much later (I could be wrong on this, it’s been a while since I’ve watched it).

      Thoughts on mine are welcome.

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      2020-04-24T17:00:32+10:00Added an answer on April 24, 2020 at 5:00 pm

      Maybe this is a more accurate version:

      After losing the love of his life, a homeless teenager participates in the TV show? Who wants to be a millionaire to find her again by remembering his own life in the slums of India.

      (35 words)

      Slumdog Millionaire (2008)

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