After millions of bank account and pin numbers are stolen, special agent Mason Young must stop the hackers before the victims go bankrupt.

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    Default Posted on January 1, 2013 in Public.
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      Barring a major change to your story, I think this is the logline. Let’s see if anyone else agrees.

      Singularity Answered on January 1, 2013.
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        It needs an “or…” or a deadline.

        i.e. “…special agent Mason Young must stop the hackers before the victims go bankrupt.”

        Because at the moment, I don’t know who these victims are and if it wouldn’t be such a bad thing if they went bankrupt.

        Default Answered on January 1, 2013.
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          Thanks Richiev! I don’t think that the story in general would change all that much but the POV has changed completely.

          Default Answered on January 2, 2013.
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            Thanks for the comment and I see where you are coming from with the deadline insert but the logline is rather lengthy as it is. But….let’s give it a shot.

            “After millions of bank account and pin numbers are stolen, special agent Young has 72 hours to stop the hackers before the victims go bankrupt.”

            ..yes?….no?

            Default Answered on January 2, 2013.
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            After millions of high profile criminal accounts and pin numbers are stolen, special agent Young must stop the hackers before the world economy collapses” (24 words)

            Default Answered on January 2, 2013.
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