After millions of bank account and pin numbers are stolen, special agent Mason Young must stop the hackers from bankrupting millions of Americans.

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    Default Posted on January 1, 2013 in Public.
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      This is very close.

      Small critique: I would try to end on the word ‘Bankrupt’ instead of ‘Americans’ also you used millions twice.

      However I would only make small changes at this point, This is a pretty good attempt.

      Singularity Answered on January 1, 2013.
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